[His smile widens when Moran answers him. Moran is rather entertaining as a pretentious dimwit, isn't he?]
A criminal who happens to be a bitter person? That would be shortened to "bitter criminal" then.
[He's tempted to turn Moran's solitaire game into 52-pickup, but that could get him in trouble. No, he just wants to listen to the buffoonery from this man's mouth instead.]
But really, your bitterness over your publication could not be clearer in your review. Perhaps you should have turned it into a more stimulating novel instead of a dry textbook.
[No, AM has not read Moran's book. He was never much of a game hunter so he had no need.]
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A criminal who happens to be a bitter person? That would be shortened to "bitter criminal" then.
[He's tempted to turn Moran's solitaire game into 52-pickup, but that could get him in trouble. No, he just wants to listen to the buffoonery from this man's mouth instead.]
But really, your bitterness over your publication could not be clearer in your review. Perhaps you should have turned it into a more stimulating novel instead of a dry textbook.
[No, AM has not read Moran's book. He was never much of a game hunter so he had no need.]